假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文， 请你修改你同桌的作文。文中共有10处错误， 每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加，删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号∧，并在其下面写出该加的词
删除：把多余的词用斜线﹨划掉。
修改：在错的词下面划一横线， 并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处， 多者（从第11处起）不计分。
Before Louis the Eleventh became king, he used to visiting a peasant where garden produced excellent fruit. After he takes office, the peasant brought him as a present a very large apple which had grown in his garden. The king, remembering the pleasant times that he had spent under the old man’s roof, gave him a thousand of crowns(25便士). The lord of the village, heard of this, thought that if one who gave a common apple received so large a reward, one giving a really valuable present would receive a much large reward. He, however, offered a splendid horse. The king accepted it and thinking of a big apple, said, “This cost me a lot of money; I now give to you in return for your horse.”