【原创】短文改错（共10小题；每小题1分，满分10分）
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两赴，每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（八），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1．每处错误及其修改均限一词。
2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
Recently we had a discussion about whether it is necessary to have daily homework. 70% of my classmates are willing to accept as daily homework. They think homework helps them review that has been taught in class. Besides, by doing daily homework, they can well understand and memorize their lessons. Furthermore, their skills in managing time can too be improved. However, 30% the students have different idea. They believe that homework reduces their amount of time with their families, not mention the time for other activities. With much homework to do, students feel tiring, and will gradually lose interest in their lessons. In my opinion, daily homework is necessary, and it must serve a purpose and be fit to a student's ability. Also, the amount of homework should be limiting.