假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（^），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在钷的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1、每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2、只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
Long long ago , there lived a famous beauty , who named XI Shi . Since she suffered from heartburn , she would often frown in front of all neighbour .
A ugly girl—Dong Shi , lived in the same village . She noticed this , thinking it very charmed , also put her hand to her breast and frown in front of everyone . When the rich saw her ,they closed their doors and would come out . But for the poor , they ran across , taking their wives and children . Poor thing ! She should admire Xi Shi’s frown , but did not know why she was beautiful .