短文改错
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(Λ),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线( \ )划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1、每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2、只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Tom won an election. All his friends came to express their congratulation to him. He was glad that he decided to treat them with a movie. They were about to leave while the door bell ring. The door opened and in came his new friend, who hurried to join in them. They enjoyed the movie quite a lot. It was directed by an European man who had a gift for shoot films, but they would like to see much more movies of this director later on.