文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。每处错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
添加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号（∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词汇的下面画一横线（__）,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词。2.只允许修改10处, 多者（从第11处起）不计分。
On the first day when I went to high school, I felt exciting．After 9 years’ study, I felt I was so closely to university．During the first year, I made many friends．I got to know all of my  classmates．Because the school work was tough, I shared happiness and sorrow for my friends．When second year came, I was arranged to other class．I was worried that no one could talk to me, but I made new friends quickly．Now it was the last year of my high school life, but I'm determined to study harder and make a greater progress．High school life is challenging for me, but I won’t give out．