高中英语改错题

第二卷（共35分）
第三部分：写作（共两节，满分35分）
第一节：短文改错（共10小题；每小题1分，满分10分）
文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词作斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
I’m the only daughter of my parents．So they worried about everything I do．For
example, when I ride my bike, my parents won’t let me to ride by myself．They are
afraid I might fall off my bike and hurt me．They are taking great trouble to
support a bike, with my mother even carries a first-aid box. I’m not free to ride and I
often say angry, “Why not let me ride alone? Now, most family have one child.Parents
want to do everything for their children．This does harm to them．Too many love from
parents may prevent children from independent．In my opinion, parents should let their
children do that they should do alone．

短文改错 (共10小题；每小题1分，满分10分)
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌的以下作文。
文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1、每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2、只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
Ladies and gentlemen,
Welcome to our English Corner. This Corner was set up three years before. Every Sunday morning, students from different schools gather around here. Many college students or some foreigners often join us. We practise spoken English by talk about everything we are intrersted. We also exchange our experience in English study. We all have a good time here. Thousand of people have been here when it was set up.
We think that they have learned a lot by taking part in activities here. It is a really supplement to our English class and it is welcome by students, their parents and teachers.

I have always prided myself for my                                           86．________
good health, for I only occasionally had to take a day                         87．________
off the work when I had a cold．So I was quite                                 88．________
offended by my doctor who, when we ran to each other                      89．________
in the street the other day, taking one look at me and                          90．________
told me that I am fat and that if I did not                                           91．________
make effort to lose some weight, I could                                           92．________
have a heart attack very long．He added that, like many                     93．________
middle-aged man, I led an inactive life．It was true that I                   94．________
had been getting fatter, but it was because I was getting older．           95．________

假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处，每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉。
修改：在错词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1．每处错误及其修改均限一词。
2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
Our English club was set up two months ago．Now，we have members of 25．We met once a week on Saturday afternoon．So far，we have been conducted a variety of activities on English learning，such as watching English films，including a Christmas party and get together with the foreign students．Last week we held an English story－telling competition．We required that the entries would be original and interesting and be presented in English within five minutes．Every member took an actively part in it．Two foreign English teachers were invited to act as judge．At last，LiBing won the first place．Many members said that the activity benefited them many ways．
Not only did it improve their speaking English，but also it brought them more fun．They hope many such activities can be held．

第二卷（非选择题）
第三部分：写作（共三节，满分55分）
第三部分 写作（共两节, 满分50分）
第二节：短文改错（共10小题，每题1.5分，满分15分）
此题要求改正所给段文中的错误。对标有题号的每一行作出  判断：如无错误，在该行右边横线上画出一个勾（√ ）;如有错误（每行只有一个错误），则按下列情况改正：
该行多一个词：把多余的词用斜线划掉，在该行右边横线上写出该词，并也用斜线划掉。
该行缺一个词;在缺词处加一个漏字符号（^ ）,在该行右边横线上写出该加的词。
该行错一个词：在错的词下划一横线，在该行右边横线上写出改正后的词。
My classmates and I worked as volunteer in Beijing                   66.________
Paralympics in September 13 . Early in the morning at 7:20 ,           67.________
we gathered at the National Stadium , namely the Bird’s Nest.            68.________      
As soon as we got into it ten minutes late ,we started to do               69.________            
some cleaning . From 9:00 am to 4:00 pm , we tried our best help     70.________      
the disabled athletes to get ready for their competitions , leading the        71.________   
audience to their seats and keep order .It was until 12:00 that we          72.________ 
had lunch and took a rest ,which last about an hour . We stopped          73.________  
working at 4:00 .Though it was a tired job , We felt                        74.________   
that it an honor to serve the disabled friends from all over the world.       75.________

（五）
Dear Abby,
How are you? Today I've got a wonderful news to tell you.           76._______
I have offered a scholarship at a university in Australia for my    77._______
further education. One hundred and twenty students took exam        78._______
for it, but only a few was chosen and I was one of them. However,   79._______
my parents are not happy about it. They are strong against me       80._______
going there. They say it is too far away that they will not see me  81._______
for a whole year and they are afraid of I will feel lonely. They    82._______
can't imagine a girl so young live alone. They advise me to study   83._______
in the capital instead. Then I'll be able to continue living with   84._______
them. How can I persuade them to accept the fact I have grown up?   85._______
Best wishes,
Jane

第Ⅱ卷（共40分）
第三部分：写作
第一节 短文改错（共10小题；每小题1分，满分10分）
此题要求改正所给短文中的错误.对标题号的每一行做出判断：如无错误，在该行右边的横线上划（√）；如有错误（每行只有一个错误），则按下列情况改正：
此行多一个词：把多余的词用斜线划掉，在该行右边横线上写出该词，并也用斜线划掉。
此行缺一个词：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（^），在该行右边横线上写出该加的词。
此行错一个词：在错的词下划一横线，在该行右边横线上写出改正后的词。
注意：
1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词。
2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
When I was 5, my father bought me the piano with all the money he had saved. Every day I
practiced playing it though my father demanded. But before long, I transferred my interest in the
piano to some other thing so began to avoid practice it. When my after realized this, he encouraged
me, but was strict whit me than before. With her help, I went the hardest time and made great
progress. Here I sincere express my gratitude to my father. On the journey of life, our parents have
lit the light of hope for us. What they have done broaden our horizon. No one deserves bigger
thanks to our parents.

以下标有题号的每一行均有一个错误，请找出，并按下列情况改正：
此行多一词：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉，在该行右边横线上写出该词，并也用斜线划掉。
此行缺一词：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（^），在该行右边横线上写出该加的词。
此行错一词：在错词的下面划一横线，在该行右边横线上写出改正后的词。
注意：请在答题卡上作答。
Here is my idea about how a friend is like. Firstly,                 
a friend is someone you can share your secrets. If you                
tell him a secret, never will he talks about it with anybody           
else. Besides, a friend is always good listener when you               
need one. After hear your sad stories, he will say some                
words that is nice and warm. Still, your happiness makes             
him happily too. What’s more, a good friend is willing to              
offer the help to which you need, or can at least give you             
some advices. In a word, friends are those you like and               
trust, and you will enjoy every minute that you spent with          
them.

第二节短文改错（共10小题，每小题1.5分，满分15分）
When I was little, my mom once took me to America         76. ______________
to visit one of our relative. At that time I couldn’t speak                77. ______________
a word of English, but I was deep impressed by the               78. ______________
teenagers here. Their skin was bright like sunshine，              79. ______________
their eyes were blue but they always looked happy．              80. ______________
How time flies! I’m teenager myself now．A friend of            81. ______________
mine in Los Angeles often tells me he attends to various           82. ______________
clubs, plans for his future and never had a formal                 83. ______________
exam in his school so far．All the students enjoy them at         84. ______________
school. That’s what I know about America teenagers．            85. ______________

　　答案与简析：
　　76. famous前加上a。 （名词数）。 77. 正确 78. we前面加when，引导一个时间状语从句。（句子成分多分析） 79. them→us （逻辑错误须关注） 80. visiting→visited（非谓动词细辨别） 81. picture→pictures（名词数） 82. passes→passed（动词形） 83. 去掉down（习惯用法要记住） 84. and→but（but, and, or和so） 85. 去掉at（句子成分多分析 / 习惯用法要记住）。
(一)
Most families in China hoped their single children will          76．_______
have a happy future, so they are very strict in their children.  77．_______
So do teachers in schools! Many children are given so much       78．_______
homework that they have hardly any spare time have sports.       79．_______
The children are forbidden to do anything but to study. No       80．_______
wonder so many children are tired of lessons. Some even          81．_______
attack or kill his parents and teachers! I believe many people   82．_______
already read this kind of news in newspapers or magazines.       83．_______
Shouldn't we draw lesson from the accidents? Now our             84．_______
government is making out a plan to solve the education problems. 85．_______

22假如英语课上老师要求同学们交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的一篇作文。文中共有8处语言错误， 要求你在错误的地方增加、删除或修改某个单词。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），在其下面写上该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写上修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2．只允许修改8处，多者（从9处起）不记分。
mountain in our town. The weather was fine. It was about noon before we arrived at
the foot of it. The three of them were very excited. As we climbed the mountain, we
fed monkey, visited temples and took pictures since the scenery was so beautiful.
Time pass quickly. It soon got dark. We had supper at a restaurant. The food was
expensive and the service was good. Then we spent on the night in a hotel at the top
of the mountain. I was tired but what wonderful the trip was!

答题要求：此题要求改正所给短文中的错误。对标有题号的每一行作出判断；如有错误(每行只有一个错误)，则按下列情况改正：
此行多一个词：把多余的词用斜线(＼)划掉，在该行右边横线上写出该词，并也用斜线划掉。
此行缺一个词：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，在该行右边横线上写出该加的词。
此行错一个词：在错的词下划一横线，在该行右边横线上写出改正后的词。
The Internet is playing a important part in  ＿＿＿＿＿
our daily life. On the net, we can’t learn about    ＿＿＿＿＿
news both home and abroad and some other   ＿＿＿＿＿
informations as well．We can also make phone calls， ＿＿＿＿＿
send messages by e-mails，go to net schools，and    ＿＿＿＿＿
learn foreign languages by ourselves．Beside，we   ＿＿＿＿＿
can enjoy music，watch sports matches and play the     ＿＿＿＿
chess or cards．The net also help us do shopping，  ＿＿＿＿＿
make a chat with others and make friends with them．    ＿＿＿＿＿
In a word，the Internet has made our life more easier．＿＿＿＿＿

此题要求改正所给短文中的错误。对标有题号的每一行作出判断：如无错误，在该行右边横线上画一个勾（√）；如有错误（每行只有一个错误），则按下列情况改正：
此行多一个词：用斜线（\）划掉，在该行右边横线上写出该词，并也用斜线划掉。
此行缺一个词：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧）， 在该行右边横线上写出该加的词。
此行错一个词：在错的词下划一横线，在该行右边横线上写出改正后的词。
注意：原行没有错的不要改。
After I finished school, I began to look for a work.    _______________
Now several months has passed, but I haven’t found the  _______________
job I’m interested. Last Sunday morning, I received a _______________
phone call from a man called Mr. Wang. He said on     _______________
the phone, “I hear you do well on your studies. I may_______________
offer you a job.” I entered into his office with a beating heart._______________
How I wished I will go through the job-hunting talk   _______________
and that she would take on me as an assistant.     _______________
But to my surprised, what he said disappointed me.    _______________
That he needed was only a model. _______________

　短文改错（每小题1分）
此题要求改正所给短文中的错误。如无错误，在答题卡相应的位置上画一个勾(√)；如有错误(每行只有一个错误)，则按下列情况改正：
此行多一词：把多余的词写在答题卡相应的位置上，用斜线(\)划掉；
此行缺一词：在答题卡相应的位置上写出该加的词，并附带前(后)词；
此行错一词：在答题卡相应的位置上写出该错词和改正后的词。
It’s a story happened five years ago. Li Hua, who lived in the        ⒈________
city, came to visit her uncle in our village. She and me became ⒉________
good friend. One day, I went to her uncle’s to do homework ⒊________
with her. But she wasn’t in. I found beautiful clock on her bed. ⒋________
I became very curiously and took it to have a look. Since I   ⒌________
have never seen a clock before, I touched it here and there.   ⒍________
But suddenly, I found the clock wasn’t working. I felt worrying⒎________
and wanted to run away. But I didn’t. Later on that day, I told  ⒏________
Li Hua that I had broken her clock. She smiled at me, saying ⒐________
that her little cousin had dropped it onto the ground this morning     ⒑________
and it had stopped working since then.

Allow me, on Behalf of my teachers and classmates give           76          
a warm welcome for all of you from London. It gives us               77        
a great pleasure to have you in our school for a brief visit              78           
You will be glad to see how good we Chinese students are             79          
getting along with their English learning We think it a bridge           80         
To the friendship among us and the people throughout the              81        
Outside world For, you know. there are still some students, most          82         
of whom are boys of science , learn English with much trouble          83          
So we hope you would give us some more advice on it Let              84           
Me wish you a pleasant stay here .May your visit go successful          85