初中英语写作改错题

My hometown is a beautiful place．

It stands beside thewide river and is rich in fish and rice． Andten years ago，it was a poor town．Many people had no jobs．They used live a hard life．In the last ten years，great changedhave taken place here．The streets have beenwidened．New roads have appeared．Factories，schools，hospitals and cinemas have been buildone after another．The life of forthe people has been greatly improved． Shelove my hometown．I love the people here．They are still working hardlyto make it richer and rich，more and more beautiful．

66． 　　67． 　　68． 　　69． 　　70． 　　

71． 　　72． 　　73． 　　74． 　　75． 　　

下面短文中的划线部分是错误的．请改正，但不得改变短文意思，并将正确的答案写在答题卡相应的位置．

Li Yang is one of my best friends． He lives a health life      1．　　

and he has a strong body． He is a excellent student and he    2．　　

is good at all subjects． He likes basketball and he jumped       3．　　

very high． He trains hard， so he plays it quite good．         4．　　

He has already won many basketball match．               5．　　

Last week， he got his five gold medal． We were all      6．　　

pride of him． I went to the match although it rained．            7．　　

It was a great game and I enjoyed ourselves so much．        8．　　

Li Yang is kind and he is friendly for everyone．            9．　　

I think you won't like him if you meet him．               10．　　

阅读短文，判断标有题号的每一行画线部分和有漏字符号（∧）处是否有错误．如无错误，在该行右边横线上画一个"√"；如有错误（每行只有一个），则按下列情况改正：

画线部分为多余的词：把该词写在该行右边的横线上并画上斜线（\）．

画线部分为错词：在该行右边横线上写出一个正确的词．

It's time for stories．Please listen carefully．

One day，a crow （乌鸦） feeledvery thirsty．（66） 　　

He flew in the forest．He looked atwater（67） 　　

everywhere． Final，he found a bottle under the （68） 　　

tree．But there was not a lot of water in∧bottle．（69） 　　

His beak （鸟嘴）could not reach toit．He tried（70） 　　

again and again， andstill could not touch the（71） 　　

water．When he wanted to givingup，an idea came（72） 　　

to him．He took a pebble（鹅卵石）and droppedit（73） 　　

into the bottle．Then shetook another and put it（74） 　　

in．Gradually，the watersrose and the crow was（75） 　　

able to drink the water．

假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文．文中共有5处语言错误，每句中最多有两处．每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改．

增加：在缺词处加一一个漏字符号（^），并在其下面写出该加的词．

删除：把多余的词用斜线（\ ）划掉．

修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词．

注意： 1． 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2．只允许修改5处，多者（从第6处起）不计分．

Dear Tom，

    I'm writing to tell you something about the Water Festival of the Dai people． The Water Festival is one of ^most important traditional festivals of the Dai people and it is popular among them． It lasted about three days from April 13 to 15 every year． During this festival， people clean their houses and put on traditional clothes． People celebrate this festival by throw water at each other to wash away from bad things and bring good luck in the new year． People have great fun in this festival． I hope he will come to China to experience it at your convenience．

Yours，

Mary

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此题要求改正所给短文中的错误．对标有题号的每一行做出判断：如无错误，在该行

右边横线上画一个勾（√）：如有错误（每行只有一个错误），则按下列情况改正：

此行多一个词：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉，在该行右边横线上写出该词，并也用

斜线划掉．

此行缺一个词：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（^），在该行右边横线上写出该加的词．

此行错一个词：在错的词下划一横线，在该行右边横线上写出改正后的词．

注意：原行没有错的不要改．

   My sister is one of a best friends of mine． We haven't always been                （1） 　　

good friends． When we were younger， she always fights with me．                 （2） 　　

We didn't like each other very much but we would argue about everything．       （3） 　　

When she moved out of our parents house and got married， we became             （4） 　　

friends． She's three years old than I am， but it doesn't matter． Every              （5） 　　

morning we talk on the phone． She tells me what she's going to do for                （6） 　　

the day and I tell her about my plans． She always gives me good advices．        （7） 　　

She's having a baby in next month and I'm really excited． I'm going to                 （8） 　　

be an aunt． My sister wants me totake care the baby for her．I can't wait．        （9） 　　

I will take all the things that I want to do with the baby serious．                         （10） 　　

假如英语课上老是要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文，老师已用横线划出了同桌可能错的10处语言点，请在对的语言点右边的横线上打"√"．如语言点出错，请吧正确的答案写在右边的横线上，如需添加，请在右边横线上些"词前或词后加××"．如语言点多余，请在右边横线上些"删除或去掉"

    例：We often vistthe museum last year．答案： visited

    I am glad to know you are interestingin Chinese idioms．Now （86） 　　

I'd like to explain what the idiom"Shou Zhu Dai Tu" meanto you． （87） 　　

    In ancient times，a farmer happened to seeinga dead rabbit under （88） 　　

a big tree near his field，which probably had run into the tree by the（89） 　　

accident and was killed immediately．He was happy to pick it up and

cooked it for dinner．He expected this would happen to another rabbit．（90） 　　

Buthe stopped working and waited under the tree from that day．（91） 　　

Unfortunateno more dead rabbits were seen and his farmland（92） 　　

was waste． （93） 　　

    This idiom is used to describe anyonewho wants to get something（94） 　　

for nothing．But I think we should always work hard to get thatwe want．（95） 　　．

短文改错
例：We often visit the museum last year.           答案：visited
Lucy is a nice school girl. She often              _______
help people after school. She is very              ________
ready to do good things for other every            _______
day. She cleans house for Aunt Huang               ________
on Sunday. And she fetches (取) the milks for      ________
Aunt wang's baby on every Saturday. She            ________
helps her classmate with their English twice a week.________
At the school, she often helps the teacher         ________
cleans the blackboard and hand in the exercise      ________
books. She's also good to her studies.             ________

下面短文中有十处错误，每处请使用底线标出，请将答案填写在答题卡相应的位置上．（每小题只填一词，不得改变原句意思）

I have changed a lot during the past three years．I used to beingweak and short． But now，I am strong and as talleras my father . The most important thing is that I have learned to care about other．

It was a Wednesday evening， when I went back home， no one werein． So I cooked the meal withmyself． I didn't know my mother was ill until my parents comeback from the hospital． They allsaid the meal was very delicious． At bedtime， I brought hot water to my mother to wash her foot． My mother said， "Dear， you have realgrown up．" It was the first time that I had realized I was not a child nomore．

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Holidays are fun but they also give thieves a lot of chances steal things.

Follow my advice,and you will safe during holidays. Even though you might

be busy shop,always notice what is going on around you. You never know

when someone might be trying to steal something from you pockets.

Don’t forget your bag in your car. It’s also important to take care of

your homes during the holidays.

请你改正下面短文中的错误．文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处．每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改．

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词．

删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉．

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词．

注意：1．每句不超过两处错误

2．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

3．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分．

I like football．I often play football with some classmate together．We are very exciting．

During every summer vacation，I usually play the football in the afternoon．I usually play it with Tom．She is one of my good friends．I doesn't have a football．But Tom has one．He always plays with me and we are happily．

My father and my mother are all football fans．They made me become a little fan．We watched the World Cup 2014in TV．We liked the German football team．They were such great that they won the champion（冠军）．

I love this game，and I hope that I can be a football star the future．

假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文．文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处．错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改．增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号∧，并在其下面写出该增加的词．删除：把多余的词用（/）划掉．修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词．

注意：（1）每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

（2）在答题卡第Ⅱ卷的第六节的题上答题．

（3）只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分．

What would people like to eat on their birthday？ The answer would be differently in different countries． In much countries， people have birthday cakes with candles． The number of candles are the person's age． The birthday person must make a wish and blow the candles． In the UK， people sometimes put a candy in a birthday cake． The child with a candy is lucky． In China， it is getting popular for the Chinese to have cake on their birthday． But many people still eat very long noodles for their birthday． They never cut up the noodles because of the long noodles are a symbol of long life． In some places， Chinese people also ate eggs on their birthday． They are a symbol of life and good luck． All of these birthday food may be different， and the ideas are the same． They take good luck to the birthday person．

假定英语课上老师要求间桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文．文中共有10处语言错误．每句中最多有两处．错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改．增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号^，并在其下面写出该增加的词．删除：把多余的词用（/）划掉．修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词．

注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词，

2．在答题卡的第六节的题上答题．

3．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分．

There lived a unhappy king a long time ago．He slept badly．His face was always pale．He often cries for no reason．This made the queen worrying．One day，a doctor was called^to examine the king．He said to the queen．"Something is wrong in your mind．He needs to wear the shirt of a happy person to make himself happy．"Then，the palace singers came to the palace and said．"It's true that I'm famous．And I'm not happy because I'm always worried about being followed by the others．"Finally，a poor man came to the king room．This was what he said"Even^I am neither an officer nor a famous person，I'm happy，because I have everything I want，I don't want what I can't have．"

假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文．文中共有5处语言错误，每句中最多有两处．每次错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改．

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词．

删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉．

修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词．

注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

           2．只允许修改5处，多者（从第6处起）不计分．

    I will study in a high school soon． Everything is new to me． I hope your school is big and clean with a large dining hall． And the library is full different kinds of books． I can get along well with my teachers and classmates． I believe my high school life must be colorful． After the class， I can play chess and basketball． Sometimes I can listen to music． Hopefully， I will be allow to surf the Internet to get many useful knowledge and information． I'm expecting my high school life．

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下面短文中有10处语言错误．请在有错误的地方增加、删除或修改某个单词．

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词．

删除：把多余的词用斜线（\划掉．

修改：在错误的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出改正后的词．

注意：1．每句不超过两处错误；

2．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

3．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分．

   My hometown，Suining，is a beautiful place．The Fujiang River run through it．But it used to be poor smalltown．People live a hard life．Since 2000，great change have taken place here．You can see many cars and high buildings in everywhere．Factories，schools，hospitals and cinemas have been built one by one．As time goes by，people's life is becoming better or the environment is becoming more beautiful．People from all over China visit Suining，because there have so many places of interest here，such as the Lingquan Temple，the China Dead Sea，the Jurassic（侏罗纪） Park and the Gaofeng Mountain．I love my hometown．I love it's people better．They are working hardly in order to make it much rich and more attractive．

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Dear Tom，

How are you？ Do you know somethingabout Chinese Knots（中国结）？Maybe you know nothing withthem． It doesn't matter， I will tell you． In China，people usualmake them with red silk， cloth and other material． They look very beautiful in ashape of diamond（钻石）， about 5 inches long and 4 inches wide．In China， these knots stand for friendship， love and good luck． People can either give them as gifts to friends norhang there in houses as decorations． I'm good at makeChinese knots． If anyone in your country wantto know more about Chinese knots，let them write to me， I will try my best to introduce myChinese knots to anyone who is interestingin Chinese culture．

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