初中英语写作试题

下面短文中有10处语言错误．请在有错误的地方增加、删除或者修改某个词．

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（　∧　），并在其下面写出该加的词．

删除：把多与的词语用斜线（\）划掉．

修改：在错误的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出改正后的词．

注意：1． 每句不超过两处错误；

2． 每处错误及其修改仅限一此；

3．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分．

Dear ladies and gentlemen，

    I'm Zhao Wei．I am an junior student．I'd like to become one of your voulunteer．

    I have learned English for 6 years． I spend a lot of my free time listen to English news and watching English movies，but I'm good at English．That is to say，it's not difficult for me talk with people in English．

    I have been interested on science since I was a child． My favorite books are about science． I often have new ideas which have encourage me a lot．

    Besides， I like that making friends with different people， no matter where they come from．I'm sure that I will get along well with it．

    I would be very thankful unless you could give me the chance．

Thank you!

（1） 　 　（2） 　 　（3） 　 　（4） 　 　（5） 　 　

（6） 　 　（7） 　 　（8） 　 　（9） 　 　（10） 　 　

某英语报社开辟专栏"Helping others"，向中学生征稿．假设你叫李华，请根据以下要点

提示，用英语写一篇征文，向该报社投稿．

1．上周你的同学魏华发高烧住院；

2．在他生病期间，你为他所做的两件事情；

3．你的感受和认识．

要求：

1．所写内容必须包括以上要点；

2．文中不得出现真实姓名和校名；

3．内容连贯，并进行合理拓展；

4． 100词左右；题目已经写好，不计入总词数．

HAPPY WEEKENDS向中学生征稿．写一篇80词左右的英语小短文，介绍一项你最喜欢的业余爱好（hobby），并陈述3条理由．

当你的父母生气的时候，你该怎么做？请你根据以下要点提亦，以"Helping Parents" 为题，用英语写一篇短文．

要点提示：1．如果你的父母变得非常生气，你应该与他们沟通，记住让他们改变需要 花费一些时间，不要对着他们大喊大叫；2．帮助父母做家务，比如做饭、洗碗、洗衣服 或者擦地板等；3．给父母一些惊喜，比如送些小礼物、举行派对等；4．如果这也不奏效，那就求助于你的好朋友，让他或她来帮帮你等；5．其它观点：……．

要求：1．词数110词左右（短文首句已给出，不计入总词数）；

2．要点提示均须涉及，可造当增加内容；

3．不用真实姓名、校名、地名．

参考词语：commimicate，diange，surprise， gift， don't work

Helping parents

If you parents get angry， you should 　 try your best to help them calm down and make them happy ． So what can you do to make them happy ？ Here are some tips ．

　 When your parents are angry ， you should be patient with them ． Remember ， it takes time for them to change themselves ． Don't yell at them because it won't help ．（与父母沟通） Also ， you can help your parents with the housework ， such as cooking ， washing dishes ， washing clothes or wiping the floor ． （帮父母做家务） Besides ， making small surprises ， such as giving gifts or holding parties ， is also a good way to make them happy ．

Finally ， if none of this works ， you can ask your friends for some other advice ．　

下面短文中的划线部分是错误的．请改正，但不得改变短文意思，并将正确的答案写在答题卡相应的位置．

Li Yang is one of my best friends． He lives a health life      1．　　

and he has a strong body． He is a excellent student and he    2．　　

is good at all subjects． He likes basketball and he jumped       3．　　

very high． He trains hard， so he plays it quite good．         4．　　

He has already won many basketball match．               5．　　

Last week， he got his five gold medal． We were all      6．　　

pride of him． I went to the match although it rained．            7．　　

It was a great game and I enjoyed ourselves so much．        8．　　

Li Yang is kind and he is friendly for everyone．            9．　　

I think you won't like him if you meet him．               10．　　

下面短文中的划线部分都是错误的，请改正并将正确答案写在答题卡上相应的位置．

Peter kept his eyes on the ground． He feels like（1）　　

there was a heavy weight in his shoulders（2）　　

as he walked home lonely． It was the worst day（3）　　

of his life． His minds would not stop thinking about（4）　　

what happened only just an hour before on the school（5）　　

soccer field． How could he has missed scoring（6）　　

that goal？ He had let his all team down．（7）　　

His stupid mistake made him angrily．（8）　　

His team had lost the game because him．（9）　　

He， was really worried that his coach may kick him （10）　　

off the team．

假如英语课上老是要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文，老师已用横线划出了同桌可能错的10处语言点，请在对的语言点右边的横线上打"√"．如语言点出错，请吧正确的答案写在右边的横线上，如需添加，请在右边横线上些"词前或词后加××"．如语言点多余，请在右边横线上些"删除或去掉"

    例：We often vistthe museum last year．答案： visited

    I am glad to know you are interestingin Chinese idioms．Now （86） 　　

I'd like to explain what the idiom"Shou Zhu Dai Tu" meanto you． （87） 　　

    In ancient times，a farmer happened to seeinga dead rabbit under （88） 　　

a big tree near his field，which probably had run into the tree by the（89） 　　

accident and was killed immediately．He was happy to pick it up and

cooked it for dinner．He expected this would happen to another rabbit．（90） 　　

Buthe stopped working and waited under the tree from that day．（91） 　　

Unfortunateno more dead rabbits were seen and his farmland（92） 　　

was waste． （93） 　　

    This idiom is used to describe anyonewho wants to get something（94） 　　

for nothing．But I think we should always work hard to get thatwe want．（95） 　　．

下面短文中有十处错，每处错皆用底线标出，请将答案填写在答题卡相应的位置上．（每小题只填一词，不得改变原句意思）

People enjoy sports all over the world．Sports are good for people's healthy．Many people like to watch others play sports．

They buy tickets or turn offtheir TV sets．People play different games in different season．They often play outside a room，but sometimes they play inside．We can findingsports here and there．Some sports are interestedand people everywhere like it．Football，for example，is verypopular that we can see muchpeople in the world practice it．People from different countries can't understand each other，but beforea game they often become good friends． Dosports is also a good way to relax．We all can get a lot from sports．

请你改正下面短文中的错误．文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处．每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改．

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词．

删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉．

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词．

注意：1．每句不超过两处错误

2．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

3．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分．

I like football．I often play football with some classmate together．We are very exciting．

During every summer vacation，I usually play the football in the afternoon．I usually play it with Tom．She is one of my good friends．I doesn't have a football．But Tom has one．He always plays with me and we are happily．

My father and my mother are all football fans．They made me become a little fan．We watched the World Cup 2014in TV．We liked the German football team．They were such great that they won the champion（冠军）．

I love this game，and I hope that I can be a football star the future．

Hi， I'm Lucy． There are four people in my family：dad， mom， my brother Tim and me． We usually visitedgrandma at weekends．        （1） 　　

She is nice and realgood at cooking．           （2） 　　

Grandma lives by herbecause my grandpa died 3 years ago．       （3） 　　

We bothmiss him． When we were young，          （4） 　　

he often told us a lot of interestedsrories，             （5） 　　

buttook us to swim in the river．              （6） 　　

I have auncle， Uncle Simon．   （7） 　　

He is kind and we often go to see exhibits in a museum together． The museum is famous．

It is hundredof years old．              （8） 　　

He married a Japangirl． They have two daughters．         （9） 　　

They live atthe United States．              （10） 　　

We will visit them in the coming summer vacation．

在过去的日子里，我们曾经欢笑，也曾经哭泣…照片，或将这些精彩定格，或勾起你对往事的回忆．某英语网站向你发出邀请，请你按要求用英语写一篇文章，分享你照片背后的故事．

要求：

1．故事必须原创；

2.80﹣120词，开头已给出，不计入总词数；

3．文中不能出现自己的姓名和所在学校的名称．

参考要点：

1．描述你的照片（时间，地点，人物…）；

2．分享你的故事（起因，经过，结果…）；

3．谈谈你的感受（感动，怀念，影响…）．

对于中学生在学校是否可以使用手机，不同的学生有不同的看法．请根据下面表

格中的提示写一篇短文

要求：1．文章应包括所有要点并围绕要点适当发挥；

2．文中不能出现真实的人名、校名和地名等

3．词数90词左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数

   Nowadays，more and more teenagers use mobile phones． Can middle school students us mobile phones at school？Different students have different opinions about it．

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下面是 Li Hong同学在校园QQ群中的留言．请你根据 Li Hong的留言和所给的提示，以 Kangkan的名义用英语回复她的问题．

提示： 1．学好英语并不难，但学习方法很重要；

2．根据你自己的体会给她提几条建议（不少于三条）

3．鼓励她坚持做下去．

要求： 1．必须包含所有提示信息，可适当发挥

2．文中不得出现真实的人名和校名等相关信息

3．词数80左右（开头已给出，不计入总词数）．

初中生活中，你有些什么改变？你是怎样改变的？请以"How I have changed"为题写一篇英语小短文，描述你发生的变化，写作内容包括：兴趣爱好、行为习惯、学习习惯等方面．

要求：1．用英语写一篇短文，80词左右．

2．任选两方面内容．

3．语言流畅书写规范，卷面整洁．

4．文中不得使用你的真实姓名校名．

How I have changed

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假如你是李明，你准备和父母周末去附近的村庄游玩．请根据提示语，给恰逢来你校交流学习的David写一封e﹣mail，邀请他一同前往．

要求：1．参考提示语，可适当发挥；

2．语句通顺，意思连贯，书写工整．

3．文中不得出现任何真实信息（姓名、校名和地名等）；

4．词数：不少于70词．（开头和结尾已给出，但不计入总词数．）

提示语：feed animals

pick fruit and vegetables

make tea

learn to cook

play games

…

Dear David，

   How are you recently？

_________________________．

Yours，

Li Ming