高中英语短文改错书面表达

假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。
文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除
或修改。
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线( \ )划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
During the summer vacation this year, I thought I should do anything meaningful instead of staying at home, so I got a job at a KFC fast food restaurant, working there as a cleaner. I worked seven hours a day for three week. The job was hard and bored and seemed endless, which made me very tired that I nearly gave it up half way. And I went on with determination. Every day I started off for work early in the morning and got to home lately in the evening. Finally I finished the job before the new term begins. Now, I understand that work means. I think it is really successful experience.

假设英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文, 请你修改你同桌写的以下日记。日记中共有10处错误，每句中最多有两处错误。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧）, 并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：
1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
Yesterday when I surfed a senior high school website of the USA, I saw a message you posted on it. I know you had planned to travel to China and need a student to serve your guide. I’m writing to apply for the job. Because of you want to travel to some places with deep and thick culture, but I’m familiar with these places, such as Beijing, Shanghai, and Shanxi, I think I’ll be your perfectly guide.
I’ll show you around many places of interest, introduced a large number of old buildings, traditional customs, and special cultural activities to you. You will have a deeper impression on these places. And I’ll also invite you to playing and talk with the local people to learn more about your life. I think I can help you with your communication.
All in all, I hope you’ll believe in me and my excellent ability of guiding. Looking forward to your immediate reply.

假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉。
修改：在错的词下面画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
The other day I had unusual experience. I was walking along a street when I saw a lady knocking down by a car. But the driver just drives away. Immediately I rushed through the street to help him. I put her on my back and carried her to a hospital nearby. On reaching the hospital, however, she started to say I was to be blame for her injury and demanded I paid the hospital bills. That really surprised me! Unless I tried to explain, she insisted that I was the very person who was responsible for the accident. I was total confused. Is it right or wrong to help other?

假如你是新华中学学生李华，在最近举行的市高中生英语口语大赛中获得了一等奖。某英语报社邀请你写一篇稿件，介绍你练习英语口语的经验。稿件内容如下：
1．树立自信，克服羞怯心理；
2．多参加英语角活动；
3．多看英语新闻（如CCTV-9）
注意：1. 词数：120-150；
2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

文中共有10处语言错误， 要求你在错误的地方增加、删除或修改某个单词。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），在其下面写上该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写上修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词。
2．只允许修改10处，多者（从11处起）不记分。
Last Sunday morning, when I was having a walk in the park near my home, I came across a crew make a new film with one of my favourite actor. I didn’t have my camera with me at that time, but I rushed back home to get. Unfortunately, by the time I got back, they have finished the scene and the actor couldn’t be seen everywhere. I was really disappointing and about to leave while he walked out  of a building. He was right there in the front of me! I couldn’t believe my luck--not only did I had my photo taken with him, but he signed his name on my shirt!