高中英语短文改错改错题

第四部分写作（共两节，满分35分）
第一节短文改错（共10小题；每小题1分，满分10分）
I went out to see a film with my brother after     
supper. On our way to the cinema, we meet an American    76.____________
girl naming Alice. She got lost and looked very          77.____________
anxious. We went up to see that was the matter. We        78.____________
then took him to the hotel. While going there, I         79.____________
told her the great changes that had been taken place       80.____________
in our country in the past few years, Alice told           81.____________
us a lot about the youth in America.                    82.____________
Although we missed the film, we felt very happily,        83.____________
for we not only helped Alice get out of troubles,         84.____________
but also knew something abut the America. We see English
can strength understanding and friendship.              85.____________

The day we were looking forward to coming at last  76．      
—a weeks’ military (军事的)training began . During the  77．      
training , each of us did his or her best . We drilled (训练) more  78．      
six hours a day , because it was very hot at the time . 79．      
Our officer was a young man , was about   80．      
twenty years old . He is very strict with us during  81．      
the training and very kind to us . On talking   82．      
with him , we came to know only much information 83．      
about army life , but also about military affairs .  84．      
The military training gave us good experience . It brought  85．      
us great happiness , too . We’ll never forget it .

Olives are about the same size like grapes, but they taste very different. 76._______
Some are bitter, some are sour, and some are very salt. Men and women eat  77._______
Them with drinks before a meal, but the children usually don’t like them at all 78._______ 　
Mr.Grey was drinking beer and eating olives while his small son Tommy   79._______
Came in. He saw that his father liked the olives very much, so he said, “May 80._______
I have one, Father?” “ Yes,” answered his father. “ Take one and try one.”   81._______
Tommy took one. He thought it tasted terrible. He watched her father      82.______
Take another and ate it. He could see that he was enjoying it, so          83._______
Tommy tried another olive, it was just as terrible as the first one          84._______
“You are taken all the good ones”, he cried, “ and leaving the bad ones for me. 85._______

短文改错（共10小题；每小题1分，满分10分）
此题要求你对一段文章改错。先对每一行作出判断是对还是错。如果是对的，则在该行右边的横线上画一个勾（√）；如果有错误（每行不会多于一个错误），则按情况改错如下：
如此行多一个词，则把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉，在该行右边横线上写出该词，并也用斜线把该词划掉；
如此行缺一个词，则在该词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在该行右边横线上写出该加的词；
如此行错一个词，则在错的词下划一横线，并在该行右边的横线上写出改正后的词。
注意：原行没错的不要改。
Dear Tom,
I am very exciting to hear that you are coming to                                          76.           
our school soon. Now let me to introduce our school                                      77.           
to you. Our school is a famous school with long history                                 78.           
We have many experienced teacher and excellent equipment.                          79.           
There were two teaching buildings. One is for seniors and the                         80.           
other is for juniors. There have two lab buildings and                                     81.           
a library. Except Chinese, maths, English, physics and                                   82.           
chemistry, we have some electives(选修课). The                                         83.           
students can choose that they like to attend. We   84.           
love our school. I am looking forward to meet you soon.           85.           
Yours,
Li hua

第二卷
第一节 短文改错（10×1分）
Between Virginia and Maryland on the Potomac River lie                  76. _______
Washington D.C. It is about 220 miles in the south                              77. ______
of New York City. The pleasantest and easiest ways to                       78 ______
get there is by long-distance bus, or by the fast
(125-mile-an-hour) train which spends a little more money than          79. ______
the bus journey and a little less money than flying. I could travel far
more than 220 miles to see Washington. It’s not city that has             80. ______
been grown up accidently as most big cities have done.                    81. ______
It was carefully planned for the nation’s capital by a                            82. ______
Frenchman, Perril Enfant. The city was named                                  83. ______
George Washington, the much-loved, much-admired,
much-respected first president of the United States.                          84. ______
In 1791 he himself arranged to buy the land which it stands.             85. ______

Dear Mrs. Winthrop,
　　So my first week at college is over! No lectures this morning so I think I’d email you and let you know what things are going.
　　I’m glad to say that anything has worked out fine in the dorm. I remember asking for a room as far away from the lifts as possible and they find me a comfortable one second floor. There are two girls from my course here and I plan to make friend with them so we can help each other on the course work. Everyone else seems very nice and warmly here.
　　Well, I had better to stop now. I’m going to attend mine first lesson this afternoon, for I’ve got some preparation to make, Keep in touch.
　　Best,
Carol

假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。   
删除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）)划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1．每处错误及其修改均限一词；
2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
I will share with you a true story happened a couple of days ago. One of my classmate bought a bag of snacks from a food store. A few roommates were then invited to enjoy snacks. Unluckily, all of them got poisoned and had stomachache with our faces pale. They are quickly sent to a nearby hospital. Doctors examined them but gave them some medicine. They were out of danger soon before taking the medicine. This accident should make us to realize the seriousness of the food safety problem. I strong suggest that the whole society pays more attention for food safety.

下面短文中有10处语言错误。请在有错误的地方增加、删除或修改某个单词。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写上该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写上修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

例如： It was very nice to get your invitation to spend ∧ weekend with you. Luckily I was the                        am completely free then, so I’ll to  say “yes”. I’ll arrive in Bristol at around 8p.m. in Friday evening.                                                               on

When I first learned to write in English, I run into many difficulties．The main problem was in that I always thought in Chinese but tried to translate everything into Chinese．My teacher advised me to keep diaries．I followed her advices．Happily it worked．Soon I began to enjoy talk to myself on paper as I was learning to express me in simple English. One day I wrote a short story and showed to my teacher．She liked it very much that she read it to the class．Everyone said the story was the good one, I was great encouraged by their words．

以下标有题号的每一行均有一个错误，请找出，并按下列情况改正：
此行多一词：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉，在该行右边横线上写出该词，并也用斜线划掉。
此行缺一词：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（^），在该行右边横线上写出该加的词。
此行错一词：在错词的下面划一横线，在该行右边横线上写出改正后的词。
注意：请在答题卡上作答。
Here is my idea about how a friend is like. Firstly,                 
a friend is someone you can share your secrets. If you                
tell him a secret, never will he talks about it with anybody           
else. Besides, a friend is always good listener when you               
need one. After hear your sad stories, he will say some                
words that is nice and warm. Still, your happiness makes             
him happily too. What’s more, a good friend is willing to              
offer the help to which you need, or can at least give you             
some advices. In a word, friends are those you like and               
trust, and you will enjoy every minute that you spent with          
them.

My secret of staying young is simple: keeping your mind awake and you will stay young all over. Take an interest in world around you, and learn at least one old thing every day. Don’t think that you are ever very old to go back to school. I know a man who entered medical college in 70. He got his degree with honors and became a famous doctor. Other man went to law school at 71 and is now a active lawyer. You may say that staying young is easy only for those live in the future. In fact, you can do it whether you care enough to try to keep your mind awake and active, and which is the only way to be always young.

In a summer night in Taiwan, Xiao Hong was going on her way to school happily then suddenly she felt the street was strong shaking. The trees were torn up and many buildings were leaned down to the ground. Even a car was destroyed by the fallen buildings. She was knocked down by a tree before she knew. Two doctors carried him to safety and she was settled down in a tent for treatment. After some time, she had got over. Seeing such many goods from the mainland of China and other countries, she believed all the destroyed houses would be built.

第Ⅱ卷（非选择题，共35分）
第三部分写作（共两节，满分35分）
此题要求改正所有短文中的错误。对标有题号的每一行做出判断：如无错误，在该行右边横线上画一个勾（P）；如有错误（每行只有一个错误），则按下列情况改正：
此行多一个词：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉，在该行右边横线上写出该词，并也用斜线划掉。
此行缺一个词：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（）,在该行右边横线上写出该加的词。
此行错一个词：在错的词下划一横线，在该行右边横线上写出改正后的词。
注意：原行没有错的不要改。
According to a survey, quite few junior and senior students     76.______
visit Internet bars frequent. They are there mainly to play games.     77.______
Worse still，many of whom even look at some unhealthy pictures.        78.______
Some of the students sometimes stayed in the bar for a whole night.  79.______
All these have a bad effect not only on their studies but also                    80.______
on their health. And it is no doubt that Net bars do no good to          81.______
students. I think students should make the full use of time, work      82.______
hard at their lessons and try their best to gain more knowledges         83.______
in order to have a bright future. I’m sincerely called on these            84.______
students who are addicted to Net bars to keep far away from it.               85.______

短文改错（共10小题；每小题1分，满分10分）
此题要求改正所给短文中的错误。对标有题号的每一行做出判断：每行只有一个错误，请按下列情况改正：
该行多一个词：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉，在该行右边横线上写出该词，并也用斜线划掉。
该行缺一个词：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（），在该行右边横线上写出该加的词。
该行错一个词：在错的词下划一横线，在该行右边横线上写出改正后的词。
注意：请在答题卡上作答。         
In the 1860s, the President Lincoln declared                                        76．_______________
that the slavery would be end in the USA. Inspired　　　                          77．_______________
by the promise, many black people joined in the Northern Army,                 78．_______________
which made the Civil War end earlier than expect.　                                  79．_______________
And to the black people’s disappointment, they were                                   80．_______________
not treated as equal citizens. Since then, the black has                                 81．_______________
been fighting for freedom.
　　During the struggle, many people are killed. The most famous              82．_______________
one was Martin Luther King. He fought for the free                                    83．_______________
for the black all their life. In 1963 he made his famous                               84．_______________
speech “ I have a dream” under the statue of Abraham Lincoln,
that inspired many generations in America.                          85．_______________

答题要求：此题要求改正所给短文中的错误。对标有题号的每一行作出判断；如有错误(每行只有一个错误)，则按下列情况改正：
此行多一个词：把多余的词用斜线(＼)划掉，在该行右边横线上写出该词，并也用斜线划掉。
此行缺一个词：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，在该行右边横线上写出该加的词。
此行错一个词：在错的词下划一横线，在该行右边横线上写出改正后的词。
The Internet is playing a important part in  ＿＿＿＿＿
our daily life. On the net, we can’t learn about    ＿＿＿＿＿
news both home and abroad and some other   ＿＿＿＿＿
informations as well．We can also make phone calls， ＿＿＿＿＿
send messages by e-mails，go to net schools，and    ＿＿＿＿＿
learn foreign languages by ourselves．Beside，we   ＿＿＿＿＿
can enjoy music，watch sports matches and play the     ＿＿＿＿
chess or cards．The net also help us do shopping，  ＿＿＿＿＿
make a chat with others and make friends with them．    ＿＿＿＿＿
In a word，the Internet has made our life more easier．＿＿＿＿＿

22假如英语课上老师要求同学们交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的一篇作文。文中共有8处语言错误， 要求你在错误的地方增加、删除或修改某个单词。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），在其下面写上该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写上修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2．只允许修改8处，多者（从9处起）不记分。
mountain in our town. The weather was fine. It was about noon before we arrived at
the foot of it. The three of them were very excited. As we climbed the mountain, we
fed monkey, visited temples and took pictures since the scenery was so beautiful.
Time pass quickly. It soon got dark. We had supper at a restaurant. The food was
expensive and the service was good. Then we spent on the night in a hotel at the top
of the mountain. I was tired but what wonderful the trip was!