高中英语改错题

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五、短文改错（共10处错误，每处错误1.5分，满分15分）
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在此处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出修改的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(＼)划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在其下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2．只允许修改10处，多者（从十一处起）不计分。
One day Rosa wrote to her friend, who was a doctor, invite him to have dinner with her families. A few days later the doctor wrote back to her but she couldn’t read his writing because the letters were written careless. Then she asked her husband for the help, but he couldn’t read it, too. Then her husband got an idea. He told her that a chemist might be able read the doctor’s letter. So the woman went to chemist’s. The chemist in the shop studied the letter for a long time but he gave her a large bottle of medicine. He told the woman she should eat twelve pills a day. Finally Rosa still had no idea whether her friend will come or not.

第四部分 写作（共两节，满分50分）
第一节短文改错（共10小题：第小题1.5分，满分15分）
此题要求改正所给短文中的错误。对标有题号的第一行作出判断：如无错误，在该行右边横线上画一个勾(√)；如有错误（每行只有一个错误），则按下列情况改正：
此行多一个词：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉，在该行右边横线上写出该词，并也用斜线划掉。
此行缺一个词：在缺词处加一个漏写符号（∧），在该行右边横线上写出该加的词。
此行错一个词：在错的词下划一横线，在该行右边横线上写出改正后的词。
注意：原行没有错的不要改。
Dear Alice,
I have just got some good news to tell to you.                                     71.              
I win a national prize for painting last week.                                                 72.              
My father was so pleasing that he suggested                                           73.              
I go to England for a holiday. I’d like to staying                                    74.              
there for half a month, visiting place of interest                                      75.              
or practicing my English as well. We’ve been                                        76.              
writing to each for nearly a year now. I have                                                 77.              
often dreamed of talk face to face with you.                                               78.              
I imagine you’ll be at vacation yourself by that                                      79.              
time. Perhaps we could go out to do some                                              80.              
sightseeing together.
Best,
Lily

第Ⅱ卷（共35分）
第四部分：写作（共两节，满分35分）
第一节 短文改错（共10小题；每小题1分，满分10分）
文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（^），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：
1．每处错误及其修改仅限一词。
2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
Jack Green was the football coach at an American college. He was appointed to find good players, and they weren’t smart enough to be accepted.
One day, the coach has brought an excellent player to the director of the college and suggested the student allowed to enter without an examination. “Well,” the director said after thinking for a while, “I’d better ask you a few questions first.” Then the student was called for and asked some easier questions, but he didn’t know any of the answers. At last the director said, “Well, what is thirty – four minus two?” It was quite a long time when the student answered, “Thirty – three.” The director threw up his hands and looked at the coach disappointed, but the coach said, “Oh, please let him in, sir! He was only wrong by two comparing with all the others.”

第四部分: 写作（共两节，满分35分）
短文改错（共10小题；每小题1分，满分10分）
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同学写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（）,并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
We'll never forget the day which my classmates and I paid a visit to a chemistry factory last week. It was a larger one with nearly 2,000 workers. It looked a garden and we could see colorful flowers, grasses and trees everywhere. We also visited some workshops and saw workers worked very hard. We talked with them and learned a lot. We understood them farther. On the way home we felt tiring. We all thought that we have a very good day. We really hoped that we could get more chances of leave the school and learn social experience.

第Ⅱ卷（共35分）
第四部分：写作（共两节，满分35分）
第一节：短文改错（共10分，每小题1分，满分10分）
此题要求改正所给短文中的错误。对标有题号的每一个行作出判断：如无错误，在该行右边横线上画—个勾(√)；如有错误(每行只有一个错误)，则按下列情况改正：
该行多一个词：把多余的词用斜线(＼)划掉，在该行右边横线上写出该词，并也用斜线划掉。
该行缺一个词：在缺词处加—个漏字符号(∧)，在该行右边横线上写出该加的词。
该行错一个词：在错的词下面划一横线，在该行右边的横线上写出改正后的词。
注意：原行没有错误的不要改。
Last week, when I was taking train in Manchester, I saw a           76._______
scene it astonished me. On the platform I noticed a woman  in       77.__    _
worn clothes walking slowly. Suddenly, he fell to the ground.          78._______
There I see other people just keep walking as if                     79._______
something happened. For a moment the woman’s eyes were           80._______
full of hopelessness. Then she struggled to her foot and got on          81._______
a train. I just wondered why others didn’t try to help with this            82._______
woman. Later I talked about this event to my friend, who looked       83._______
at me and said, “What else did you do at that time? Just looking?”       84._______
I looked at him in silence. I realized I was just so selfish as others      85._______
on the scene, too.

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第二节短文改错（共10小题；每小题1.5分，满分15分）
此题要求改正所给句子中的错误，按下列情况改正：
该行多一个词：把多的词用斜线（\^*）划掉，在该行写出该词，也用斜线划掉。
该行缺一个词：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧^*），在该行写出该加的词。
该行错一个词：在错词下划一横线，在该行右边横线上写出改正后的词。
A boy and his father were having walk in the                                 76. __________
country when it suddenly began to rain very hardly.                   77. __________
They do not have their umbrellas with them, and there                   78. __________
had nowhere to hide themselves from the rain, so                      79. __________
he soon got wet. While they were walking home through                       80. __________
the rain, the boy was thinking for a long time. Then at                 81. __________
last he turned to his father and said to him, “Why did                82. __________
it rain, father? It isn’t nice, isn’t it?” “No, it isn’t very                 83. __________
nice, but it’s much useful, Tom!” answered his father.                 84. __________
“It rains to make the fruits and the vegetables to grow for us.”               85. __________

第四部分：写（共两节，满分35分）
第一节：短文改错：（共10小题，每小题1分，满分10分）
此题要求改正所给短文中的错误，对标有题号的每一行做出判断：如无错误，在该行右边横线上划一个勾（√）：如果有错误（每行只有一个错误），则按下列情况改正：该行多一个词：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉，在该行右边横线上写出该词，并也用横线划掉该行缺一个词：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，在该行右边横线上写出该加的词该行错一个词：在错的词下划一横线，在该行右边横线上写出改正后的词注意：原行没有错的不要改
Last summer I go to America and studied at a language           76. __________
school. I had many wonderful experience, but I also               77. __________
had a sad one. One day, the school held party, where               78. __________
I invited to talk about Guilin. After that they asked me a lot          79. __________
of things about China. But I couldn’t explain them with English      80. _________
clearly. I felt sadly. I learnt a lesson from this experience. I          81. _________
have already studied English for eight years, but I can’t use it        82. _________
very good. I must work hard to improve my spoken English          83. _________
so that I will not be able to communicate freely with foreigners.       84. _________
I hope I can be a bridge between China and others countries          85. _________
in the future.

第三部分：写作（共两节，满分35分）
第一节：短文改错（共10小题；每小题1分，满分10分）
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同学写的以下作文。
文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处，错误及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（/\），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉。
修改：在错词的下面划一横线，并在该词下面写出改正后的词。  
注意：
1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2．只允许修改10处，从第11处起不计分。
Many students are on the sports field take part in all kinds of sports. A ball game is going on among Class one and Class two and one knows who of them will win in the end. Do you see the student over there ? Some young men are practicing the highly jump. One of them is a best high jumper in our school .He practices very hard every day. Because he wanted to break the school record. On this corner of the field ,you can see other group of students .Their teacher is telling themselves how throw the spear. Our students love sports and they want to keep fit so as to serve for the people.    

第II卷(非选择题 共35分)
注意：将答案写在答题卡上，写在本试卷上无效。
第三部分：写作(共两节，满分35分)
第一节：短文改错 (共10小题；每小题1分，满分10分)
假如英语课上老师要求同学们交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出应加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(＼)划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在其下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词。
2．只允许修改10处，多者(从十一处起)不计分。
China is an ancient civilization with cultures dating back more than 4，000 year．Basic
elements for the modern world such as paper，gunpowder，paper money，or compasses
originated in China．Today，China is again at the forefront of world，with Chinese goods
reach all parts of the world．The Chinese culture have also fascinated many people．In
the Shaolin Monasteries，the Great Wall of China or the Forbidden City of Beijing，China
has its unique arts and architectures that what draw thousands of visitors every year．The
Chinese food is equal popular around the world and it is loved by much non-Chinese．
But in China，the food can found in great varieties and is different in region to region．
So join us and experience all these．

In a summer night in Taiwan, Xiao Hong was going on her way to school happily then suddenly she felt the street was strong shaking. The trees were torn up and many buildings were leaned down to the ground. Even a car was destroyed by the fallen buildings. She was knocked down by a tree before she knew. Two doctors carried him to safety and she was settled down in a tent for treatment. After some time, she had got over. Seeing such many goods from the mainland of China and other countries, she believed all the destroyed houses would be built.

I have always prided myself for my                                           86．________
good health, for I only occasionally had to take a day                         87．________
off the work when I had a cold．So I was quite                                 88．________
offended by my doctor who, when we ran to each other                      89．________
in the street the other day, taking one look at me and                          90．________
told me that I am fat and that if I did not                                           91．________
make effort to lose some weight, I could                                           92．________
have a heart attack very long．He added that, like many                     93．________
middle-aged man, I led an inactive life．It was true that I                   94．________
had been getting fatter, but it was because I was getting older．           95．________

　　答案与简析：
　　76. famous前加上a。 （名词数）。 77. 正确 78. we前面加when，引导一个时间状语从句。（句子成分多分析） 79. them→us （逻辑错误须关注） 80. visiting→visited（非谓动词细辨别） 81. picture→pictures（名词数） 82. passes→passed（动词形） 83. 去掉down（习惯用法要记住） 84. and→but（but, and, or和so） 85. 去掉at（句子成分多分析 / 习惯用法要记住）。
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Most families in China hoped their single children will          76．_______
have a happy future, so they are very strict in their children.  77．_______
So do teachers in schools! Many children are given so much       78．_______
homework that they have hardly any spare time have sports.       79．_______
The children are forbidden to do anything but to study. No       80．_______
wonder so many children are tired of lessons. Some even          81．_______
attack or kill his parents and teachers! I believe many people   82．_______
already read this kind of news in newspapers or magazines.       83．_______
Shouldn't we draw lesson from the accidents? Now our             84．_______
government is making out a plan to solve the education problems. 85．_______

短文改错（共10小题；每小题1分，满分10分）
此题要求你对一段文章改错。先对每一行作出判断是对还是错。如果是对的，则在该行右边的横线上画一个勾（√）；如果有错误（每行不会多于一个错误），则按情况改错如下：
如此行多一个词，则把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉，在该行右边横线上写出该词，并也用斜线把该词划掉；
如此行缺一个词，则在该词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在该行右边横线上写出该加的词；
如此行错一个词，则在错的词下划一横线，并在该行右边的横线上写出改正后的词。
注意：原行没错的不要改。
Dear Tom,
I am very exciting to hear that you are coming to                                          76.           
our school soon. Now let me to introduce our school                                      77.           
to you. Our school is a famous school with long history                                 78.           
We have many experienced teacher and excellent equipment.                          79.           
There were two teaching buildings. One is for seniors and the                         80.           
other is for juniors. There have two lab buildings and                                     81.           
a library. Except Chinese, maths, English, physics and                                   82.           
chemistry, we have some electives(选修课). The                                         83.           
students can choose that they like to attend. We   84.           
love our school. I am looking forward to meet you soon.           85.           
Yours,
Li hua

以下标有题号的每一行均有一个错误，请找出，并按下列情况改正：
此行多一词：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉，在该行右边横线上写出该词，并也用斜线划掉。
此行缺一词：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（^），在该行右边横线上写出该加的词。
此行错一词：在错词的下面划一横线，在该行右边横线上写出改正后的词。
注意：请在答题卡上作答。
Here is my idea about how a friend is like. Firstly,                 
a friend is someone you can share your secrets. If you                
tell him a secret, never will he talks about it with anybody           
else. Besides, a friend is always good listener when you               
need one. After hear your sad stories, he will say some                
words that is nice and warm. Still, your happiness makes             
him happily too. What’s more, a good friend is willing to              
offer the help to which you need, or can at least give you             
some advices. In a word, friends are those you like and               
trust, and you will enjoy every minute that you spent with          
them.

假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。   
删除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）)划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1．每处错误及其修改均限一词；
2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
I will share with you a true story happened a couple of days ago. One of my classmate bought a bag of snacks from a food store. A few roommates were then invited to enjoy snacks. Unluckily, all of them got poisoned and had stomachache with our faces pale. They are quickly sent to a nearby hospital. Doctors examined them but gave them some medicine. They were out of danger soon before taking the medicine. This accident should make us to realize the seriousness of the food safety problem. I strong suggest that the whole society pays more attention for food safety.